Spin-Off Reviews!

The Adventures Of Tentacle High ( So Far) Review : A

To start, welcome to the spongebob spin-offs. Anyways, your show is neat so far and you shouldn't end it yet. Sure, there has been a ton of Squidward spin-offs before, but alot of them have turned out to be great. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!

jjsthekid wrote:The Adventures Of Tentacle High ( So Far) Review : A

To start, welcome to the spongebob spin-offs. Anyways, your show is neat so far and you shouldn't end it yet. Sure, there has been a ton of Squidward spin-offs before, but alot of them have turned out to be great. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!

Hey, thanks for the review! I decided not to end the series quite yet, it's got a couple seasons left, at least.

Not a Holly Jolly Christmas, Either: A+

Amazing & well written! Can't wait for the next part

Looking for SpongeBob (Episode 3): F

I think this is my first F. Why did this episode get an F? Because if it was actually put on TV, it would be about 30 seconds long. Don't come up with an excuse, because I don't care, no one made you write this episode. It's sloppy, and I don't know why you did it.

that70sguy92 wrote:Looking for SpongeBob (Episode 3): F

I think this is my first F. Why did this episode get an F? Because if it was actually put on TV, it would be about 30 seconds long. Don't come up with an excuse, because I don't care, no one made you write this episode. It's sloppy, and I don't know why you did it.

First of all, i don't think it would ever make it on TV. Also, I know it's bad. it's probably the shittiest thing i've ever written.

Valentine's Day: A

Love it! I look forward to the next one ;D

Someone review my show!! lol



Tentacles High A+


Honestly, this is by far my favorite show. It really catches my interest, I love how you do "Notes" at the end. I hope you don't cancel it because as far as I know it's your first spin off and I think it has great potential.

tvguy347 wrote:Someone review my show!! lol



Tentacles High A+


Honestly, this is by far my favorite show. It really catches my interest, I love how you do "Notes" at the end. I hope you don't cancel it because as far as I know it's your first spin off and I think it has great potential.

Not alone.

Heh, I should catch up.

Bikini Top A-
4 Stars

It was excellent. But

Spoiler:

dies.

Behind Enemy Lines Review: A

Well to start, it's great to see that The Krusty Train is back. Anyways, i have been enjoying your recent episodes with Mac and Mr. Krab's backstories and i can't wait for more.

Behind Enemy Lines Review:A-

This was verry well done. Can't say much but It was still really good. Been liking these episodes with Mac and Mr. Krab's backstories


I would like it if someone reviewed my shows

Reviews by Dragiiin.

Bikini Top-A+
I was so wrong. This spinoff is suspensful, I love the music, and Temperance is probibley one of the best spinny characters ever. But, seeing spongebob characters in it was surreal. Which is ironic cause this is a spongey spinoff. Other then that. Good. Top doller.

Picses Moon- A
I...this...I love this spinoff. I love the plot, I love the characters, I love the setting, I love everything. Top Notch, good Man!
How ever, It cannot beat Jumpstart.
Jumptstart A+
I swear, if we could make fanclubs for spinoffs, I would so totally make one for jumpstart. You think it's confusing....I think it's not confusing at all. Serious. If I had to stay up analysing this thing, I would.
Now, let's stop kissing Terminoob's ass and get serious.

A life of a fish- A
All of the above, man. (If you get that, then you get a cookie.) I can't understand the quotes, the jokes are, truth be told, not very good, and the characters are generic. Sorry man.

Nice day, gentlemen.

MermaidMan vs. Team Ghoul: A

Darn that Team Ghoul!

Anyways, I loved this episode. One of the better ones during the show's penultimate season, and the fight was great. It was also one of my favorite openings you've ever had in the show, I don't know why. Keep it up, I can't wait for the show's final season, and to see what happens next!

That Kiss Review: A+

Epic! I loved the romantic theme in it. Shame

Spoiler:

died in the other ep though. But keep up the good work because i have been getting interested in your show more and more. Can't wait for the Season Finale.

Bikini Top (Show) A
5 Stars


An excellent show. Super dramatic, jaw dropping, and it keeps you on the edge of your seat. If you're on here, you can't keep from reading this suspenseful, award-winning show. Bravo, 70s!

Forever Young-Dude, you outdid yourself.
Fantastical. And I'm still waiting for The book.
Bikini Top! The Bikini Book! =P
Fantastic. And it shows why Temperance is fantasic.

Little Big Planet Review: A

Your spin-offs get Better and more funny each episode. I loved the little alien guy and he might be my new favorite character. I also laughed at the Dunkin Donuts parody. Though more could have happened near the ending, it was still another Epic episode of your spin-off. Your spin-off is actually starting to be like the actual show itself, which is great.

I can't wait To laugh my ass off at More episodes.

New Eelz: B+

Loved that it referenced The O.C.'s "The Dearly Beloved." The O.C. is one of my favorite shows of all time, but it was kinda mocking it, which bothered me a bit. Not enough to distract me from how unique Eelz is though.

Bikini Top TO ALL OF JOO-A
So thhaaaaaaatttt'''sssss ow she got the bruise. She disn't need to get in line, pisses me off.
And I like Temperence's sister.

SpongeBob's Middle School Years: D-

I have a bunch of issues with this spin-off. But let me start off saying that the premise is enjoyable, and it does actually have some potential. But now I have to go away from the positive and focus on the negative aspects of the show. Firstly, the script format you're posting in doesn't work. At all. Much better than The Life of a Fish, but still bad. Worse than bad, maybe. It would be much easier to read if you posted the way everyone else is posting. It's much easier to follow. And you're also kind of raping the shift key, typing in caps too much. But that's just my opinion. You're also using too many smilies. That's okay when posting messages on the actual site, but when posting spin-offs it's a little different. To make it seem more professional, you should steer clear of smilies, especially in dialogue of characters. Another thing that bothers me is that this school is obviously underwater, in the SpongeBob universe, but it's Ulysses S. Grant Middle School. Why not Poseidon Middle School? Neptune Middle School? Aqua Junior High? Stuff like that, that makes more sense underwater. But that's just my two cents.

In His Arms wrote:SpongeBob's Middle School Years: D-

I have a bunch of issues with this spin-off. But let me start off saying that the premise is enjoyable, and it does actually have some potential. But now I have to go away from the positive and focus on the negative aspects of the show. Firstly, the script format you're posting in doesn't work. At all. Much better than The Life of a Fish, but still bad. Worse than bad, maybe. It would be much easier to read if you posted the way everyone else is posting. It's much easier to follow. And you're also kind of raping the shift key, typing in caps too much. But that's just my opinion. You're also using too many smilies. That's okay when posting messages on the actual site, but when posting spin-offs it's a little different. To make it seem more professional, you should steer clear of smilies, especially in dialogue of characters. Another thing that bothers me is that this school is obviously underwater, in the SpongeBob universe, but it's Ulysses S. Grant Middle School. Why not Poseidon Middle School? Neptune Middle School? Aqua Junior High? Stuff like that, that makes more sense underwater. But that's just my two cents.

Thanks for the comments.......The name of the school was just random, But I think i'll change it. Yeah and I'll stop doing script format, it's kind of annoying. i'll also try not to "shift" to much, I didn't know it was this bad though......... But I will make changes!

Jason- The Musical: B-

This is what I was talking about. Drastic improvement over the first two episode. You're aware that it was short, so I'm not even going to mention that. That's one reason why you're not receiving an A is a typo or two. Other than that, bravo. Good idea for a story, too.

In His Arms wrote:Jason- The Musical: B-

This is what I was talking about. Drastic improvement over the first two episode. You're aware that it was short, so I'm not even going to mention that. That's one reason why you're not receiving an A is a typo or two. Other than that, bravo. Good idea for a story, too.

Thanks! I will try and make the episodes longer and edit as much as i can.

Death by Locker: A
So close to A+, but there were still some capitalization errors. If you're having trouble with that, then type these on Word or something similar. But it was an interesting plot, and easy to follow. I'm glad to be giving you an A, and hope to give you an A+ in the future.

Ghostly Trails: A+++++++

Wow. All I have to say at the moment.... This episode kept me on the edge of my seat, and was really intense. I enjoyed it a lot. Very impressed. Wow. One of my favorite episodes of the show, if not my favorite overall. Great, great job!

Look After You Review: A

Another awesome episode of Bikini Top. Sad Jackie left though, but glad she came back. Cn't wait to see what happens with Naomi. And Don't worry, i love cliffhangers.

Awesome song picks BTW.

SeriousBob GrimPants: A+

An awesome new series! Elastic and Dragiiin are an awesome comedic duo that will stop at nothing to make readers laugh out loud. This could be the new Eelz!

tvguy347 wrote:SeriousBob GrimPants: A+

An awesome new series! Elastic and Dragiiin are an awesome comedic duo that will stop at nothing to make readers laugh out loud. This could be the new Eelz!

And A+ before we even made the first episode? That boggles the mind!

Dragiiin123 wrote:

tvguy347 wrote:SeriousBob GrimPants: A+

An awesome new series! Elastic and Dragiiin are an awesome comedic duo that will stop at nothing to make readers laugh out loud. This could be the new Eelz!

And A+ before we even made the first episode? That boggles the mind!

You gave tons of sneek peeks in the chatbox!

The Final Misadventures: A-

An excellent finale. Didn't have to much suspense, but It was a good wrap up to the show. The message at the end put a nice sprinkle on it. Well done. The reason for an A- is I'm against Yvonne and Patrick as a couple. But it's my opinion.

The End: A+

This was the best finale to any show ever. God I'll miss this spin off.

The End Review: A++

This was an awesome series finale for The Misadventures, 70s. Shame it is ending though. But i still enjoyed it and what happened to Patrick and co. Can't wait for the Movie though!

Fred the Jellyfish(so far): B+

Not bad for a crossover.

To the Maxx! (so far): D

I would be easier on you, but it seems like you make a new spin-off every other week anyways. So here's what I say, find one, and stick to it. I don't like this one, so I don't think it should be the one to stick to. It has a few minor typos, and it's too hard to follow sometimes. I may have a small brain and a short attention span, but I really think I'm not the only one having this problem. So needless to say, improvements need to be made to this show.

Super Spy Sponge (so far): F

This really has potential to be an... average... show. The plot isn't very interesting to me. You already did something similar to it, which also didn't work well. Remember Secret Agent Snail? Yeah. You've made it more detailed, but it just doesn't work well. The way you post dialogue is weird, and once again, it's hard to follow, as is webizoid's new show. And I don't like that it's in first person, I feel like that could be a big obstacle in any show, especially a show with this type of plot. The characters are flat so far, as well. Major improvements are needed on this show, and since you're a pretty new spin-off creator, I don't know if you'll be able to make them. But I'll look out for future episodes to see if you follow my advice, and work to improve this show.

that70sguy92 wrote:To the Maxx! (so far): D

I would be easier on you, but it seems like you make a new spin-off every other week anyways. So here's what I say, find one, and stick to it. I don't like this one, so I don't think it should be the one to stick to. It has a few minor typos, and it's too hard to follow sometimes. I may have a small brain and a short attention span, but I really think I'm not the only one having this problem. So needless to say, improvements need to be made to this show.

Super Spy Sponge (so far): F

This really has potential to be an... average... show. The plot isn't very interesting to me. You already did something similar to it, which also didn't work well. Remember Secret Agent Snail? Yeah. You've made it more detailed, but it just doesn't work well. The way you post dialogue is weird, and once again, it's hard to follow, as is webizoid's new show. And I don't like that it's in first person, I feel like that could be a big obstacle in any show, especially a show with this type of plot. The characters are flat so far, as well. Major improvements are needed on this show, and since you're a pretty new spin-off creator, I don't know if you'll be able to make them. But I'll look out for future episodes to see if you follow my advice, and work to improve this show.

Says a person who had 2 spin-offs until one ended. But whatever. I'll make improvements.

Super Spy Sponge (so far): B

this is a pretty good show in my opinion. It is pretty hard to follow, like my show, whch i will explain some stuff later, what I have been planning to do all along (You hear that, 70s?). You are probbably going to do the same though. It's wierd how you Put (Name): "(Dialogue)" (name) said as he (action). Just stick to "(Dialougue)" said (name) as he (action). Other than that it seems pretty good. I wonder where he got the lions, and where's Karen? I guess I'm going to find out.

Golden Pearl episode 1: The Fight - C+

An okay start to the series, but the plot seemed a little repetitive, what with Pearl just going to different people for advice. But the plot of the show itself sounds interesting.

Golden Pearl-A
Hey, I liked it.

Wumbology wrote:Golden Pearl episode 1: The Fight - C+

An okay start to the series, but the plot seemed a little repetitive, what with Pearl just going to different people for advice. But the plot of the show itself sounds interesting.

That was the point

Dove Drunk-I just noticed that this episode has a similiar plot to an episode of seinfield.

Dragiiin's April Fool's Prank that he forgot to post on April Fool's Day

A-

Cool and funny!

Mermaidman: The Brave and The Bold - A-

I'm a fan of this spin-off. I especially love the notes/trivia/goofs thing you do at the end.

EELZ WOWOWOWOWOW: 10/10

Best fucking spin-off ever.

Hitting Rock Bottom A+
5 Stars


I expected something different from this show but it still quenches my thirst for a Rock Bottom themed spin off. The show meets expectations, for it is in the comedy genre. In my opinion, it blows Bikini Top out of the water. I'm more of a comedic guy myself. Overall, the show is a hit, gaining 100 views after it's release.

Naomi the best person ever and Temperance is fuckin bullshit F---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -
tHIS SPINOFF SUCKS! NAOMI IS SHIT!

This is a review of Dragiiin's Temperence is fucking beautiful and Naomi is shit.

This show lacks everything...if he switches the names around, then it would work.

TV repairman wrote:This is a review of Dragiiin's Temperence is fucking beautiful and Naomi is shit.

This show lacks everything...if he switches the names around, then it would work.

To bad Naomi is shit.

Krusty Krab Years before-A
I'll admit, not until recentley have I read this spinoff, and it's a nice idea. AND YES, JIM IS AWESOME.

Generation Patrick Finale Review: A

Nice finale Dragiiin. Sad to see it end so soon though. I'll miss Octi and the others. The ending was kinda funny even though it was meant to be sad.
Can't wait to see what you have planned for your other spin-offs.

Gen. Pat Final A-

Awesome finale. I loved it!!