Spin-Off Reviews!

TV Repairman wrote:Surreal Sponge-F

I take what I said back. Although this is pretty funny, you're getting all these reviews when you're just taking bits and pieces of OTHER PEOPLE'S work and smashing it into a spin off and calling it your own. It's like having sex with a prostitute, and then another prostitute, another one, and then you have all these babies. So you smash all of the babies together so you don't have to get off you're fucking lazy ass to see all the babies.

^Belongs in the archives xD

I almost had the fetish to archive it. Eventually, I might use part of your quote as my sig.

TV Repairman wrote:^Belongs in the archives xD

Let us be the judge of that.

I like Surreal Sponge because it's fun to try and spot what all of the references are from.

Dayman: A+++

It was a good first episode. I found myself fucking laughing my ass off. I loved the mentions he gave and it was just stunning. And with Dragiiin's style of writing, it was short and full of comedy. A+++++++++++++++++++

TV Repairman wrote:Dayman: A+++

It was a good first episode. I found myself fucking laughing my ass off. I loved the mentions he gave and it was just stunning. And with Dragiiin's style of writing, it was short and full of comedy. A+++++++++++++++++++

Thanks =D

Dayman A+

Great stuff. Can't wait to see more!

+1 for the "Sweat Loaf" reference.

TV Repairman wrote:Surreal Sponge-F

I take what I said back. Although this is pretty funny, you're getting all these reviews when you're just taking bits and pieces of OTHER PEOPLE'S work and smashing it into a spin off and calling it your own. It's like having sex with a prostitute, and then another prostitute, another one, and then you have all these babies. So you smash all of the babies together so you don't have to get off you're fucking lazy ass to see all the babies.

^Belongs in the archives xD

Well, if thats the case, then you're a fucked up a father.

Anyway...

Dayman: CotS: B.

Ehh... Gramatical errors tipped me off. And it wasn't all spectacular for a pilot =/ I expect better in the future.

ExKizuna! wrote:

TV Repairman wrote:Surreal Sponge-F

I take what I said back. Although this is pretty funny, you're getting all these reviews when you're just taking bits and pieces of OTHER PEOPLE'S work and smashing it into a spin off and calling it your own. It's like having sex with a prostitute, and then another prostitute, another one, and then you have all these babies. So you smash all of the babies together so you don't have to get off you're fucking lazy ass to see all the babies.

^Belongs in the archives xD

Well, if thats the case, then you're a fucked up a father.

Anyway...

Dayman: CotS: B.

Ehh... Gramatical errors tipped me off. And it wasn't all spectacular for a pilot =/ I expect better in the future.

It will be, pilots normally aren't that good.

Your Own Thought Could Betray You-A-

Coral Drive still fails to disappoint. This episode was good, but still not as good as Learning to Cope. I enjoy how Wumbology shows how everyone continues to heal after the death of Harold and the two criminals. I would like to get background on Vinnie and Lola soon because I feel that the show is focusing on Erica and Robert, The Wilsons, and Morticia (that's how you spell it right? xD). But the episode was obviously excellent and I can't wait to see what happens with Wader.

TV Repairman wrote:Coral Drive still fails to disappoint.

I saw "fails" and "disappoint" and I was gonna say, "Hey, you..."

Thanks, man.

Sharky Shore Pilot-A
It was a nice episode, a bit short and I enjoyed it. I like the staff, and I know that they're all experienced spin off writers and this is a guaranteed spinny winner in the Comedy Category.

Spongeblade Pilot-A
I REALLY enjoyed this episode. It was an excellent start to the series, action packed, and mysterious. It's one of those spin offs that instantly explodes with action, drugging the reader with the liquid of the awesome action. The reason why it is an A is because there were several grammar errors, and those shouldn't show up in the polished, finished episode. Overall, excellent start to the series.

Jacka$$ - F

I know this was not meant to be serious, but dear lord, you thought this was funny or something? :S

GurrenLagannMon(XD) wrote:Jacka$$ - F

I know this was not meant to be serious, but dear lord, you thought this was funny or something? :S

If that was the title of the dead chicken spin-off pilot, then I agree completely.

Oddysey..Is Odd
A
Great ep, you thought it was rushed, I didn't. It was pretty suspenseful and seeing Sponge and Aaron fight was great.

Spongeblade new ep.
A+
YOU COULD CUT THE TENSION WITH A KNIFE! D:
Great episode, nice drama between Patrick and Spongebob, and KEKEKE

Fearland, Part 1: B

Very good episode. I can identify with the fear of roller coasters that Charlie has, and I liked the ending as well. Keep it up!

Sharky Shore: A+

The new Eelz! This spin-off is amazing and funny to read. Plus, making fun of woahwoah FTW.

Mermaidman:The Brave and the Bold:A+

Amazing contunity,I love how so much happens that makes it seem like a real 25 min. show!
I love the plot and a few episodes I read.Really discrptive and visual.
Keep the episodes coming!

Team SpongeBob Pilot - C-

Its great that you have joined in on the spin-off making teenj12. However, your pilot was incredibly short and left me wanting more information. The premise is interesting enough, but you need to back it up with much more detail than what you gave your readers

Steel Sponge wrote:Sharky Shore: A+

The new Eelz! This spin-off is amazing and funny to read. Plus, making fun of woahwoah FTW.

Why did you just insult our show?

...Oh, you meant that as a compliment? OH! Wow... I just never thought calling us EELZ would qualify as a compliment.

The Bob_Ball wrote:Team SpongeBob Pilot - C-

Its great that you have joined in on the spin-off making teenj12. However, your pilot was incredibly short and left me wanting more information. The premise is interesting enough, but you need to back it up with much more detail than what you gave your readers

Thanks for the review.I guess I'll be working on my detail .

Spongtourage: A-

I really like it.Its seems like a potential hit.The plot is great and I felt the charecters (expecially Mr.Krabs) was true to charecter.I like how you build up their move to the parioded Hollywood sort of.I cant wait for the second episode .

Steel Sponge wrote:Sharky Shore: A+

The new Eelz! This spin-off is amazing and funny to read. Plus, making fun of woahwoah FTW.

Calling them Eelz is calling them shit. Do you forget what Eelz is supposed to be?
That's right, a shit spinoff. Oh yeah, and werem't you bawling over the woahwoah678 thing a couple of minutes ago?

Dragiiin123 wrote:

Steel Sponge wrote:Sharky Shore: A+

The new Eelz! This spin-off is amazing and funny to read. Plus, making fun of woahwoah FTW.

Calling them Eelz is calling them shit. Do you forget what Eelz is supposed to be?
That's right, a shit spinoff. Oh yeah, and werem't you bawling over the woahwoah678 thing a couple of minutes ago?

Over it. Now that I thought about woahwoah again, and that I think his charms and despairness got be banned, he sucks now.

Steel Sponge wrote:

Dragiiin123 wrote:

Steel Sponge wrote:Sharky Shore: A+

The new Eelz! This spin-off is amazing and funny to read. Plus, making fun of woahwoah FTW.

Calling them Eelz is calling them shit. Do you forget what Eelz is supposed to be?
That's right, a shit spinoff. Oh yeah, and werem't you bawling over the woahwoah678 thing a couple of minutes ago?

Over it. Now that I thought about woahwoah again, and that I think his charms and despairness got be banned, he sucks now.

Poser.

Eelz kicked ass and you know it.

Goosebumpsfan2 wrote:Eelz kicked ass and you know it.

Eelz was an unfunny piece of crap. It was just random shit put together. It sucked.

Goosebumpsfan2 wrote:Eelz kicked ass and you know it.

Eelz was okay (I read it in the shipyard), but the fact that you made that comment annoys me. Everyone doesn't have to agree on everything you know, it's ex's opinion.

There's a reason I'm doing a TMAS/Eelz crossover you know.

When it was still on, everyone loved it but now people hate it. The heck?

Goosebumpsfan2 wrote:There's a reason I'm doing a TMAS/Eelz crossover you know.

When it was still on, everyone loved it but now people hate it. The heck?

Um, Dragiiin didn't like it when it was one(He even said it was a joke), Bob thought it was okay, and I hated it.

And we're the only ones that hate it. So do research before you post shit.

ANYWAY...

Team SpongeBob (so far): C

It has a lot of action, but I think that the episodes are too short.

Oh yeah, I was gonna review Team SpongeBob also.

Team SpongeBob (so far): D-

The episodes are WAAAAAY too short, in my opinion. And I would like a better story then "BOOM BOOM POW ACTION ACTION!" taking up a lot of it.

Goosebumpsfan2 wrote:There's a reason I'm doing a TMAS/Eelz crossover you know.

When it was still on, everyone loved it but now people hate it. The heck?

lolwut? Many people hated it while it was on.

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Team SpongeBob: F

The episodes are extremely short. If these were actually broadcast, they would be less than five minutes long, if that. That is something you really want to avoid while crafting spin-offs. Another problem is that there is no emotion, and no character development. Just fighting.

Team Spongebob-F
STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS!

Tentacle Planet: A+

One of Futurdrama's funniest installments yet. I know you were experiencing the writer's block bug, and I'm sure this excellent episode got you out of that funk. It was packed with funny jokes, and there wasn't as much for me to correct as usual, to be honest. You should be proud of that, and I expect more good work.

that70sguy92 wrote:Tentacle Planet: A+

One of Futurdrama's funniest installments yet. I know you were experiencing the writer's block bug, and I'm sure this excellent episode got you out of that funk. It was packed with funny jokes, and there wasn't as much for me to correct as usual, to be honest. You should be proud of that, and I expect more good work.

THANKS!

Congrats to Bubby0000. You have brought shame to names that sound similar to Bob

Sponge's Atlantis - WTF

There is absolutely no point to this show whatsoever except to show emoticons that hold signs, so it doesn't even deserve an actual letter grade. EPIC FAIL!

Dragiiin123 wrote:Team Spongebob-F
STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS!

If that was directed at me..when have I ever demanded reviews?

Team Spongebob

Look...you have AWESOME ideas and TS eps are action packed but just work on the structure on your writing. Grammar errors plague your eps and the eps would be around five minutes if they are actually aired. The only eps that CAN be short are if they're summary-type spin-offs. But yours in dialog driven. But if your writing can be better, your spin off will be better.

tvguy347 wrote:Team Spongebob

Look...you have AWESOME ideas and TS eps are action packed but just work on the structure on your writing. Grammar errors plague your eps and the eps would be around five minutes if they are actually aired. The only eps that CAN be short are if they're summary-type spin-offs. But yours in dialog driven. But if your writing can be better, your spin off will be better.

Thanks for the advice .

Social Status A-
4 Stars

Still a pumping show, and it somewhat reminds me of Learning to Cope. The scene with Ed is a classic, and I enjoyed it. This episode wasn't a good as other episodes, but still satisfied me. I also enjoyed how Morticia apologized to The Wilsons-it was nice to see them getting along now. This episode was EXTREMELY vivid-I could just picture Vinnie smoking a cigarette after Lola storms upstairs. Good work, Wumbo. Keep it up!

??????
F
STOP ASKING FOR REVIEWS!

But seriously, folks.
?????
D
Are you seriously gonna keep on churning out spinoffs that only have the pilot, have basically NO original characters, and are gonna be canceled after the first episode? It doesn't work. Not all of your ideas have to be spinoffs.
Holy fucking shit.

tvguy347 wrote:Social Status A-
4 Stars

Still a pumping show, and it somewhat reminds me of Learning to Cope. The scene with Ed is a classic, and I enjoyed it. This episode wasn't a good as other episodes, but still satisfied me. I also enjoyed how Morticia apologized to The Wilsons-it was nice to see them getting along now. This episode was EXTREMELY vivid-I could just picture Vinnie smoking a cigarette after Lola storms upstairs. Good work, Wumbo. Keep it up!

Whoo! Wumbo's still got it!

Any-hoo, I give your ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? pilot a B+. Pretty good start.

Doubts/ Team Spongebob
A-

Good episode. It still had grammar errors, but the overall plot was wonderful.

Past Lives-A

I really liked the pilot. The episode left me eager to see more .

MermaidMan:The Bave and The Bold,The Final Showdown (Pt.2)

Amazing episode.It had awesome action.Im really starting to like Mrs.Magic! Overall,I can't wait for Part 3 in this epic 5-part Saga!!!

teenj12 wrote:MermaidMan:The Bave and The Bold,The Final Showdown (Pt.2)

Amazing episode,it had awesome action.Im really starting to like Mrs.Magic! Overall,I can't wait for Part 3 in this epic 5-part Saga!!!

I feel like wumbology.
There's an edit button, you know.

Dragiiin123 wrote:

teenj12 wrote:MermaidMan:The Bave and The Bold,The Final Showdown (Pt.2)

Amazing episode,it had awesome action.Im really starting to like Mrs.Magic! Overall,I can't wait for Part 3 in this epic 5-part Saga!!!

I feel like wumbology.
There's an edit button, you know.

Yup,there is.