Spin-Off Reviews!

Bikini Bottom Screenies: A very interesting spin-off so far, can't wait to see more. A-

Adventures Of Fred:Episode 5: To Save a Fish-A
Awesome episode! Will you incorporate George into more episodes? He seems somewhat interesting.

To Save a Fish: A

A breath of fresh air after that abysmal tv.com episode.

Undersea Mysteries-Incorporated: An interesting spin-off, that I will definitly keep watching. A

The Way We Met-My Stalker and Me:A++

Your best episode.Please continue!

Uncancelled Review: A

Yay, GP is back! I knew you couldn't end it. Can't wait to see more Octi since he is my favorite character.

Hope there is some awesome shit planned.

jjsthekid wrote:Uncancelled Review: A

Yay, GP is back! I knew you couldn't end it. Can't wait to see more Octi since he is my favorite character.

Hope there is some awesome shit planned.

Well, lucky you, since the next episode is a Octi episode.
Creeping Eelz: A
Extremely interesting episode. I will be following this series closely.

Total Cartoon Island - D

Since 4EverGreen says he has made some changes to it, I thought that meant he was rewriting it in general. I decided to give this show a second chance.

Positive note, I will admit it is a lot easier to read now that it is split up. That really bugged me on tv.com and it did before you edited it.

My opinion on everything else remains the same. The characters have not changed that much. To me they are still carbon copies of the Total Drama characters and the episodes are still carbon copies of Total Drama episodes. For example, When The Going Gets Tough. While glimpsing over it, I thought, "Hey, look at that. Its Basic Straining in disguise." Jorgen was obviously Chef here with his booming voice and his Chef like qualities. I get that the character of Jorgen has similar structure to Chef, but that does not mean you can make him like Chef completely. Oh and this line "Okay. Whoever had the sick, twisted idea to let Jorgen Von McCrazy be in charge of this challenge, I must admit, I'm a little bit impressed!" was the exact same damn line said at the same damn point in that episode. Btw, the Norbert/Treeflower/Jimmy situation is definitely the same one as the Duncan/Courtney/Harold situation. Speaking of which, in your next episode Jimmy just happened to get voted out just like Harold did in TDI. Wait a minute, what's this? Jimmy has feelings for Susie? This can't be the same as Harold have feelings for Leshawna, btw I am being sarcastic about what I just stated.

Sorry 4EverGreen, I told myself I was going to be nicer to you after being a douche to you when you first joined the SBC, but its so damn hard just sitting back and watching you rip-off my favorite television show this way, when you are allegedly making changes to it, but so far you have not. Do not sit back there and say that you are making changes when absolutely nothing has changed.

Star City
How long can this go on for?

LOE-Expansions

This was another great idea! But...these recent episodes are feeling really rough and unpolished. It seems rushed and frankly are way too short. I love this series to death, but these episodes are just half-assed. =/ But...this episode did hold many memorable lines. I love the idea of the arcade, but it seems that the arcade would become more popular than the candy store, defeating the purpose of having one. It just seems a little ridiculous that they would make it so complicated when all in all, they'd make more money selling them the candy straight through.

The Way We Met-A+
Held my interest, really cool. It's interesting of how Pierce went from Journalist to Aspiring Politician. And the genitalia part was pretty funny. You have earned a fan!

Sea Rancher DS - B+

Really random episode but thats Generation Patrick in a nutshell, except Octi actually showed some heart and compassion with his relationship with Mystery which is building his character up .

Steel's Underwater Survivor: A

Ha, pretty awesome so far. A little long, but still fun to read. What makes it better is that I am the host of it. Can't wait to see more of it though.

Edit: nvm

The Fallen Criminal: Miles better than Sponge's Atlantis, but just okay.
Grade:C

Underwater Survivor: SBC Style - A

Awesome new spin-off, and not just because I'm in it.

Underwater Survivor: SBC Style: A-

Very good, too bad i'm not in it.

Total Cartoon Island/Action- At best you seperated the paragraphs out, and thank youfor that, as I now don't have headaches wen I read, but I feel likle it's too much of a rip-off of the actual show. D-

Underwater Survivor: SBC Style: A+

Very good so far. I look forward to reading more.

My Leg! A+
I love this spinoff. The plots are not to short and not to long, and it has cartoony plots and non of the dramatic crap! You are a winner of spinoff!

My Leg!: A

This spin-off is really clever and funny. Keep up the good work!

My Leg!: A+

Great spin off!

Blood and Bones: Really interesting so far, keep it up. A

Squidlerd:Squidland-
Awesome Episode,This is One Incredible Spinoff.

Squidland: A

Pretty good episode. I enjoyed it.

Total Cartoon Island: I know this show just ended, but I still want to give my two cents on it. This show was... not good. The paragraphs were too big, it wasn't entertaining, and all the episodes are 100 percent unoriginal. Sorry 4EverGreen, but I wasn't pleased with this pathetic excuse for an "original" spin-off. D-

I want to say something about Total Cartoon Island. I think that a lot of you people are being way too hard on 4EverGreen. First of all, he's putting more time and detail into his work than most of us would ever do. And second, he's constantly slandered for being unoriginal, but the show is supposed to be a Total Drama Knock-Off! That's the entire point, but he's replacing the cast with our favoirte Nicktoons. Frankly I have no idea why it's such a crime. I may not always feel like reading all of Total Cartoon Island due to it's length but I think that it's quite well-written, an entertaining read, and everyone should give 4EverGreen a break. It's not like he's writing crappy one paragraph spin-offs with lousy grammar.

The Cartoon wrote:I want to say something about Total Cartoon Island. I think that a lot of you people are being way too hard on 4EverGreen. First of all, he's putting more time and detail into his work than most of us would ever do. And second, he's constantly slandered for being unoriginal, but the show is supposed to be a Total Drama Knock-Off! That's the entire point, but he's replacing the cast with our favoirte Nicktoons. Frankly I have no idea why it's such a crime. I may not always feel like reading all of Total Cartoon Island due to it's length but I think that it's quite well-written, an entertaining read, and everyone should give 4EverGreen a break. It's not like he's writing crappy one paragraph spin-offs with lousy grammar.

No, we don't just mean being unoriginal. He copies, I repeat, COPIES episodes of Total Drama Island sometimes. I mean it, he copies an episode of Total Drama Island, uses the same plot and dialogue, and replaces all the characters with his. I know you're backing 4EverGreen up because you like him and his work, and maybe we are being too critical, but sometimes, people need criticism.

The Cartoon wrote:I want to say something about Total Cartoon Island. I think that a lot of you people are being way too hard on 4EverGreen. First of all, he's putting more time and detail into his work than most of us would ever do. And second, he's constantly slandered for being unoriginal, but the show is supposed to be a Total Drama Knock-Off! That's the entire point, but he's replacing the cast with our favoirte Nicktoons. Frankly I have no idea why it's such a crime. I may not always feel like reading all of Total Cartoon Island due to it's length but I think that it's quite well-written, an entertaining read, and everyone should give 4EverGreen a break. It's not like he's writing crappy one paragraph spin-offs with lousy grammar.

I agree that it's supposed to be a knock-off, but that doesn't mean he can just copy whole episodes. I agree people need to give him a break, and also commend 4EverGreen for trying hard to continually post episodes, however ta doesen't excuse some of lazy writing.

SBlover95 wrote:

The Cartoon wrote:I want to say something about Total Cartoon Island. I think that a lot of you people are being way too hard on 4EverGreen. First of all, he's putting more time and detail into his work than most of us would ever do. And second, he's constantly slandered for being unoriginal, but the show is supposed to be a Total Drama Knock-Off! That's the entire point, but he's replacing the cast with our favoirte Nicktoons. Frankly I have no idea why it's such a crime. I may not always feel like reading all of Total Cartoon Island due to it's length but I think that it's quite well-written, an entertaining read, and everyone should give 4EverGreen a break. It's not like he's writing crappy one paragraph spin-offs with lousy grammar.

I agree that it's supposed to be a knock-off, but that doesn't mean he can just copy whole episodes. I agree people need to give him a break, and also commend 4EverGreen for trying hard to continually post episodes, however ta doesen't excuse some of lazy writing.

Yeah, there's a difference between spoofing and plagiarizing. There's also a difference between trolling and giving constructive criticism. If we were just being mean when he was trying hard{not saying that he never does}, then I'd understand. But that's not the case.

I'm not saying that anyone's trolling. But I've seen much over five people completely slam Total Cartoon Island. How would you feel if you were 4EverGreen and you were working really hard on a spin-off, and didn't hear any nice comments from anyone? I'm just saying we should be appreciative of his work, even if it isn't our cup of tea. As for the Plagiarizing thing, it's not like he's getting it copyrighted and selling it to the highest bidder.

The Cartoon wrote:I'm not saying that anyone's trolling. But I've seen much over five people completely slam Total Cartoon Island. How would you feel if you were 4EverGreen and you were working really hard on a spin-off, and didn't hear any nice comments from anyone? I'm just saying we should be appreciative of his work, even if it isn't our cup of tea. As for the Plagiarizing thing, it's not like he's getting it copyrighted and selling it to the highest bidder.

I'm with The Cartoon on this one.

The Cartoon wrote:I'm not saying that anyone's trolling. But I've seen much over five people completely slam Total Cartoon Island. How would you feel if you were 4EverGreen and you were working really hard on a spin-off, and didn't hear any nice comments from anyone? I'm just saying we should be appreciative of his work, even if it isn't our cup of tea. As for the Plagiarizing thing, it's not like he's getting it copyrighted and selling it to the highest bidder.

I have to agree with you here

Brothers Down-A+

I loved this episode! It was just so vivid. I could picture Fletcher and Peter. The way you made them gradually think about each other was truly amazing!

Guru Gakuto (So far): A

An interesting spin-off. I love it so far. Can't wait to see more.

Spongekaka-Its decent,but there's already a show about rock bottom.

teenj12 wrote:Spongekaka-Its decent,but there's already a show about rock bottom.

Doesn't matter.

We're allowed to make a spin-off involving another SB character or another SB place even if someone already made one involving that character.

jjsthekid wrote:

teenj12 wrote:Spongekaka-Its decent,but there's already a show about rock bottom.

Doesn't matter.

We're allowed to make a spin-off involving another SB character or another SB place even if someone already made one involving that character.

Oh,ok.

Jackfish- D. Sorry Santa Dog, this spin-off just did not impress me. The episodes are too short, and they don't seem to have a point.

I like it Elastic.

SBC Down Under Pilot Review: A+

I actually enjoyed it. It reminds me of steel's survivor spin-off. I love the concept and I will be following this spin-off.

Krabs and Plankton Rivalry Pilot: A-

I LOVED this pilot. It really goes in depth, and I must say-you write in script format well. But there were some flaws, which is why it's an A-. Like this:

Student: Haha, hey it's Sheldon!

Plankton: MY NAME IS SHELDON!

I didn't understand that part. xD Did you mean "MY NAME ISN'T SHELDON" because I'm confused.

Latest episode of "SBC Down Under" = 9 out of 10!

Gossip Hurls-Bikini Top-A+

that70sguy92 casts a magical spell over us with this new episode of Bikini Top. It's an endless spiral of shockers and the true reality of high school drama. The episode then concludes with an amazing cliffhanger, leaving fans thirsting for more. Outstanding. Mesmerizing.

SBC Down Under: A+

This spin-off is excellent! All of the SBC members have realistic personalities, and their just great. I was also a little surprised. I didn't think I would be cast as a main character, but I was. Awesome job tvguy!

Gossip Hurl - A-

Shocker, not an A+. Then again, im not one to suck up by rating episoes A+'s.

=P Anyway, great return for BT... But it felt rushed. Not as rushed as Trey's funeral, or Memories an Reprucussions, but still. Otherwise, awesome. Also, great music selection! =D

Gossip Hurl-Nope, still continues to disappoint. But good nonetheless.
B+

Once in a Texas Moon Review: A

Awesome episode! We saw Sandy's new form. Shame Yin and Yang didn't appear in it again, but there is always next episode. I enjoyed the fight with the Pisces Wizard. Another reason I liked it was because I suggested some of the idea.

Gossip Hurl-B+
Morgan's abuse has been my favorite storyline,but this episode kinda dissapoints a bit.

Brave Kaiser Beings Underwater: A+

I loved this spin-off, and Clay was bad-ass.