The Misunderstood Life of Doodlebob

A brand new spin-off I just came up with. It follows Doodlebob's life after the events of Frankendoodle. The episodes will be orgainized as 2 mini-episodes rather than 1 full episode, as the case has been for my previous spin-off's.

Discuss below

It almost looks like Guru Gakuto built a bandwagon.

Anyways, it's still good.

Steel Sponge wrote:It almost looks like Guru Gakuto built a bandwagon.

Anyways, it's still good.

Haha care to explain Steel

Btw, I have my suspicions about this. Nothing personal SBLover. I think you are a great writer, but I am having a huge problem buying the premise. We are going to follow DoodleBob's life before Frankendoodle? He was drawn and created during the episode Frankendoodle. Sorry buddy, but I am not sold

Clapeh wrote:

Steel Sponge wrote:It almost looks like Guru Gakuto built a bandwagon.

Anyways, it's still good.

Haha care to explain Steel

Btw, I have my suspicions about this. Nothing personal SBLover. I think you are a great writer, but I am having a huge problem buying the premise. We are going to follow DoodleBob's life before Frankendoodle? He was drawn and created during the episode Frankendoodle. Sorry buddy, but I am not sold

This. The Adventures of Fred and Squidlerd are great spin-offs, but this just doesn't feel like it'll work. It doesn't feel coherent to the episode Frankendoodle, and while I like DoodleBob, I'm not interested in a whole spin-off about him.

Perhaps you should make a spin-off about the artist at sea instead.

I'm going to try this for a lttle bit (5 episode pairings or so) and we'll see how it goes with everyone

Episode 1A: Beginnings

Doodlebob was waking up at about 7:20 AM. He was excited for his first day of Doodle school. He was 8 years old at the time. He was so excited to finally get away from his mother's harsh homeschooling. He remembers how she treated him during that time.

(Flashback)

Doodle mom- Now, whats X= in 3X+7

Doodlebob- Umm, 3.45?

Doodle mom- Wrong!

Then proceeds to whip him repeatedly. By the time she's finished, his sides are somewhat bleeding, and his face is covered in tears.

Doodle mom- Now whats the answer?

Doodlebob- 2.45!?

Doodle mom- Good, you can sleep in your bed tonight.

(Flashback ends)

Doodle mom- Have a good day, honey.

Doodlebob- EEEK!!!!

Doodle then gets to school, and is happy to learn that they have the same class together, he's kind of happy. Then he gets to class.

Doodle mom- Hello students I am your new teacher. You will address me as mother.

Doodlebob- NOOOOOO!

End of A.

Episode 1B: Right before "Beginnings"

Your probablly wondering how the hell doodlebob ended up in any school at all, or how he even exists after "Frankendoodle." Well now thats what this episode is for.

Doodlebob- Ouch, my goddam... I mean goshdang leg! It's broken!

Doodlebob had just been erased from Bikini Bottom, and was sent to the world of Forgotten Ideas, where all ideas that have been erased from existance are sent to live in. Doodle then limped over to a house on the closest street... turned out it was a dog pound for angry dogs, and the dogs started running after him. Doodle ran as fast as he could, but the dogs eventually caught up with him and were about to chew him up to death when suddenly...

???- Back away bitches! Back away!

The dogs immediately backed away. Doodlebob backed out of his corner and went up to lady that basiclly saved his life.

Doodlebob- Who, who are you?

Doodlemom- I'm just an ordinary doodle like you, but you can call me mom.

Doodlebob- Ok, mom.

And for the first time in his young drawn life, Doodlebob had someone who actually cared for him. If only he knew of the trials that awaited him.

End of B

Episode 2A: Special Education

In the first quarter of 2nd Grade, Doodlebob ad already 3 F's, 2 D's, and 2 C-'s. His mom increased the amount of whipping that occured in the house, and it made Doodlebob barely able to stand up. He couldn't get an homework done to the fact that his hand was broken almost entirely due to the mass whipping at the house. He was actually happier at school then at home, "because of the fact that he could actually walk and talk and laugh, and not be knocked down by some bitch" as bob put it to hisbest friend, Dodle Rick.

Doodle Rick- Wow, whata mutherfookin biotch yo mama is!

Doodlebob- Rick, talk in noral english language, before I fucking slit you.

Doodle Rick- Sorrah, joost sayin yo mama's a-

Doodlebob pulls out an eraser.

Doodle Rick- Never mind.

Doodlebob- Thats what I thought.

PDA- Doodlebob to the principals office immediately.

Doodlebob then arrives to find his mother and a strange woman talking in idle conversation.

???- Doodlebob you are being put in the special education program for children with disabilities.

Doodlebob- WHAT! WHY?

???- Well your failing grades are red flags that tell us you need help, so this will make the workload easier.

Doodlebob- Oh ok.

Doodlemom- And you'll have a new teacher named mrs. Blowpuff. She's nice and considerate.

Doodlebob- Ok then, I shall the class tomorrow.

???- No rtard, your joining it now.

The 2 stare at the woman for a minute before they go to the classroom. Doodle was happy that he didn't get whipped that night

End of A.

Episode 2B: Those Damned Bottomfeeders

Doodlebob was happy that it was finally the weekend, where he could just relax and do nothing for once, as the special ed kids have no homework on weekends. He was getting ready to play outside when his mom forced him to clean up his room. He went to make his bed when he decide to lay on it...

Doodlebob- WOAH! WHAT THE HELL!?

Doodlebob was sucked into the mattress and was free falling for several minutes before finally hitting the ground.

Doodlebob- Where am I?

???- Your in the land of the Bottomfeeders!

Doodlebob- What the heck?

Jeb- We made a colony of Bottomfeeders in the insides of your bed. I'm jeb and I'm the leader of the bottomfeeders, Jeb.

Doodlebob- I need to goback up to the light please.

Jeb- Ok, use our teleporter.

So Doodlebob went back up to the light and got a stink bomb out of his closet, and ended the civilization of the Bottomfeeders, therefore ending a secret century of technological advanement that the sponge's never knew of.

End of B.

Not as good as your others, but I'll stick with it for a little bit.

There was a few good parts,but Squidlerd and MyLeg Franchise is better.

Yeah I'm sorry man, but I just can't get into this. While I see moments of why I like your spin-offs, your other spin-offs are still better and the premise is still blech

Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

Firion_525 wrote:Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

Yea,Squidlerd was awesome.

teenj12 wrote:

Firion_525 wrote:Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

Yea,Squidlerd was awesome.

Yeah, but I don't think it's as awesome as The Adventures of Fred the Fish. Writing an episode for that spin-off was one of the funnest things I've done in a while.

This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write.

that70sguy92 wrote:This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write.

We're just voicing our opinions, it's not like we're forcing him to cancel it.

Firion_525 wrote:Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

I'm still writing JOF, I haven't abandoned it, I just wanted to try something different then what I have been doing so far in all my spin-offs and. Insted of long overreaching storylnes, and dark-like humor, I wanted to try something more lighthearted and simple. It's not always going to be like this, where he's in Elem. school and he deals with lttle bottomfeeders and such. He'll get older, and I'll change the style and humor it's written if you don't like it, then just don't read it, and don't be like "Go back to doing Fred" because I haven't abandoned it yet, and all it does is make me irritated at the people who critizing my work.

that70sguy92 wrote:This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write.

^ This person is a very wise user

It was pretty good some parts were a bit random but the story has good potential

Episode 3A: Doodle Ultimatium (1)

Doodlebob was tired. Tired of working so very hard for a grade he knew he'd never acheive. He had worked all of 2nd grade to try to get a B in his math class, but he knew he'd never achieve it no matter how much he tried. He studied the worksheets he got every single night, he worked out problems his mother gave him (he got whipped quite alot sadly) but no matter how much he tried, he continued to fail the class, and if he didn't get his act together soon, he'd fail the 2nd grade, and then he'd be whipped for eternity. Then in the middle of class he got a phone call on his cell phone, so hewent t the bathroom to answer it.

Doodlebob- Hello?

???- Hello, this is Doodlebob, correct?

Doodlebob- Correct.

???- Doodlebob, you are now an agent with the FIA, also known to others as the fak- I mean famous intellgence agency. One of our most skilled operatives, Doodle Jason, has mysteriously disappeared and we need a replacement operative, and your the onnly one who's skilled enough to comlee this mission for us.

Doodlebob was silent for a minute.

Doodlebob- You do realize I'm a second grader in doodle school, right?

???- Yes, well uhh... shut up! Don't question my logic! Anyways are you up for the mission?

Doodlebob- Yes sir! Now what is the mission I am being asked to do?

???- You must assainate the leader of the international Marijuana smuggling ring, the Dope Heads. We'll drop you off inside their headquarters, and then you must sneak into the room stealthily, and murder him with a sniper gun. Do you understand your mission, and if you fail you will get fucking murdered.

Doodlebob- Yes sir.

And so a journey into the heart of an international crisis began right then.

TO BE CONTINUED/ End of A.

Episode 3B: The Doodle Ultimatium (2)

Previously on TMLD, Doodlebob was assigned by the FIA to assianate the leader of an international Mariajuana Smuggling Ring, The Dope Heads, and make out without being "fucking murdered" as the FIA put it.

On today's second part of the episode, Doodlebob is dropped off at the Dope Heads headquarters and stealthily enters through the back door with .44 caliber and a snipe scope on hand to kill the ringleader and anyone else who poses a threat to him and the FIA. He moves so quietly that even a mouse in the corner of the room could barely hear him move. But then he entered the room where the ringleader was supposed to be hiding

???- Hold it, bitch!

Doodlebob then saw he was surrounded by 10 strong men, all which grabbed him immediately. They strapped him down to a chair, and pulled out a bucket of water.

???- Who sent you to us?

Doodlebob- I came on my own accord.

???- Liar!

They then stuck his head in the bucket of water, and maybe him gasp for life before they drew him out of it.

???- Now, I'll ask again, who sent you to us?

Doodlebob- I came on my own accord.

Hours seemed to go by, as Doodle answered their question with the exact same answer. Then finally...

Doodlebob- alright, the FIA sent me to stop your marijuana smuggling ring!

???- Dude, we're not the smuggling ring, they are.

Doodlebob- What!?

???- Don't you know what FIA stands for? It stands fo "Fake Intelligence Agency" little moron.

Doodlebob- Goddammit, I was bahoozled by some assholes.

???- Look, we'll take you back home but please be careful about who you associate yourself with, kid.

Doodlebob- Ok.

They then took Doodlebob back home, where his mom awaited him. He got 50 whippings along 3 months of no electronics... right when summer ws happening. Poor Doodlebob.

End of B.

SBlover95 wrote:

Firion_525 wrote:Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.

I'm still writing JOF, I haven't abandoned it, I just wanted to try something different then what I have been doing so far in all my spin-offs and. Insted of long overreaching storylnes, and dark-like humor, I wanted to try something more lighthearted and simple. It's not always going to be like this, where he's in Elem. school and he deals with lttle bottomfeeders and such. He'll get older, and I'll change the style and humor it's written if you don't like it, then just don't read it, and don't be like "Go back to doing Fred" because I haven't abandoned it yet, and all it does is make me irritated at the people who critizing my work.

that70sguy92 wrote:This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write.

^ This person is a very wise user

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SBlover95 wrote:
Firion_525 wrote:
Had some okay parts, but not that good. I think you should go back to Squidlerd and Fred the Fish.


I'm still writing JOF, I haven't abandoned it, I just wanted to try something different then what I have been doing so far in all my spin-offs and. Insted of long overreaching storylnes, and dark-like humor, I wanted to try something more lighthearted and simple. It's not always going to be like this, where he's in Elem. school and he deals with lttle bottomfeeders and such. He'll get older, and I'll change the style and humor it's written if you don't like it, then just don't read it, and don't be like "Go back to doing Fred" because I haven't abandoned it yet, and all it does is make me irritated at the people who critizing my work.

that70sguy92 wrote:
This show is okay, but I think everyone should stop telling him what to write. He can write whatever he likes to write. Smile


^ This person is a very wise user Smile


That's not what I meant. I just suggested spend more time working on JOF. I'm not criticizing you or forcing you to do anything, you can write whatever you want.

Listen SBLover, I did not mean for my comment to be taken out of context whatsoever. I just do not like the premise of your show. However, that does not mean I do not like your show. Heck at first glance, I hated the concept of Coral Drive, but now it is one of my favorite spin-offs to read.

As for Doodlebob, I think its an okay show and like I previously said there are elements to this show that remind me of why I like your spin-offs. I did not mean for my comments to be taken as criticism because you can write whatever the hell you want to write.

Episode 4A: When Bears Attack (1)

One day DoodleRick was playing outside in the woods when suddenly a bear came roaring out of nowhere. It clawed his face to shreds, torn his arms out of their sockets, sucked the blodd out of him as if he was a vampire, and the ran off. Doodlebob cried and cried at his funeral, and knewitwas his job to kil the very bear who took his friend away from this world. So he went home, unlocked the lock to his dad's lockbox, and pulled out a scope rifle. He then goes out into the woods, and catches the bear in site, and is about to fire when suddenly, it disappears, and the bear turns around and knocks Doodlebob out. He is then carried to a cave, where he wakes up smelling something cooking... it was the bear getting ready to cook him! Doodle then quickly escaped from the bag he was stuck into when suddenly-

Bear- Don't leave.

Doodlebob- AHHH! IT CAN TALK!!!!!! HOLY SHIT!!!!

Bear- Please I just want to SUCK YOUR BLOOD... I mean give some food.

Doodlebob- Wait a minute, you must be a vampire bear, aren't you!?

The Bear then attemptd to bare his fangs into Doodlebob, but failed to do so and Doodlebob was confronted by a gangof bears. Doodlebob then ran back and stabbed the first Bear Vampire in the chest, and as it gasped for life, DoodleRick stood outside of the cave and jumped up to bite him.

TO BE CONTINUED/ End of A

Episode 4B: When Bears Attack (2)

DoodleRick had bitten Doodlebob and then his transformation began. His skin turned a deathly pale white, his teeth grew sharp and he sprang up and spread out his wings. He then looked at himself in his new form and he was shocked at himself. This was not how he wanted to be, he knew he had to kill the head vampire and return to normal. He then decided to talk to vampire DoodleRick about this.

Doodlebob- DoodleRick, how do we get back to normal!?

DoodleRick- Normal!? I love being a vampire!

Doodlebob- WHAT!? Why?

DoodleRick- Because I love it! And I'll never let you kill the head vampire.

The two then got into a scuffle, where DoodleRick was left bleeding, and barely concious. Then Doodlebob turned into a bat, and flew off towards Doodlevania. After what seemed like hours and hours draging on, Doodlebob finally made it, and saw the head vampire sipping a cup of tea at his bedside. HE then turned around, and retired to his bed. When that happened, Doodle snuck up the staircase, and was about to stab the head Bear Vampire, but when he opened the sheets-

Head- Looking for someone?

Doodlebob- Ack, the head Bear Vampire!

He then threw a knife right into Doodlebob's heart, and Doodle went unconcious. Then, he saw a burning builiding, fishes running in panic, and a half-destroyed yellow object. He knew what was his god-given destiny was to do, and some dip-shit vampires weren't about to stop him. So he wakes up, grabs the knife, pounds it in like a stake, murdering th head vampire, he then returns to normal, and then rides the Express Train home. Unfortuately, he forgot about...

Doodlemom- Where were you today?

Doodlebob- Fighting off a vampire invasion.

Doodlemom- Your supposed to be grounded mister!

She then pulls out the whip, therefore ending Doodlebob's summer.

End of B

Pretty good episode.