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Post by Sheldon J. Plankton 1/22/2011, 1:45 am

I'm sorry for the short beginning. I'll try to write more once I start developing ideas. This is all I've got for now, but it's not quite finished yet. There's a second part. I hope you like it. Smile

Season 1, Episode 1: Sally! -Part One-

(One day, a female fish entered the Krusty Krab.)

???: Hello, I came here for a job. Are there any spots open?

Squidward: You look new. I never see you around here before. What brings you to this place?

???: Oh, sorry. My name’s Sally. I just came to this town from New Kelp City. You see, my house burnt down because of a terrible fire. So they told me I had to go somewhere of my choice, and I decided to come here. Bikini Bottom looks like a wonderful place to stay at.

Squidward: You can talk to my boss in that office over there.

Sally: Sure.

Squidward: You should be careful, though. Sometimes he can play hard to get. Wait, why exacty did your house burn down?

Sally: That's sort of... private. I can't let other people know about that.

Squidward: Whatever.

(Sally did a nervous chuckle then walked away. She stepped in Mr. Krabs’s office, him noticing the newcomer. He quickly shoved all the money off his desk, having the cash drop onto the floor.)

Mr. Krabs: Hi there! What brings ye into me office? You ain’t supposed to be in here. This room be for this resturant owner only, unless I say so.

Sally: Well, one of your employees told me that I should come to you for a job application.

Mr. Krabs: We need help in here?

Sally: …I noticed the Help Wanted sign taped upon the front door.

Mr. Krabs: Oh, that. I just put it up there to bring in customers. *pirate laugh*

Sally: -_-

Mr. Krabs: So you need a job, eh? >.>

Sally: Correct.

Mr. Krabs: You’re in luck, miss! Just fill out all these papers and you’re ready to go.

Sally: Awesome, I can’t wait to work here.

Mr. Krabs: Anytime.


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Post by tvguy347 1/22/2011, 1:57 am

Pretty good pilot. Smile
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Post by Metal Snake 1/22/2011, 2:06 am

An alright pilot. Good job, Sheldon.
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Post by Sheldon J. Plankton 1/22/2011, 2:40 am

Thanks guys. SOO Happy

Alright, here's more of it.
Season 1, Episode 1: Sally! -Part Two-

(Sally sat down in at a table in a chair. She grabbed a pencil then looked at the application form.)

Sally: Okay, now what do they want me to answer...?

-What is your full name?-
Sally M. Fish

-Your age?-
14

-Street address-
128 Coral Ave., Pacific Ocean

-Gender-
Female, duh.

-Why do you want to work at the Krusty Krab?-
I'd like to work here because I love all kinds of restaurants, serving other customers. Working in fast food service might be just the right thing for me.

(Sally is just about done. She put the papers in order together then came back to Mr. Krabs.)

Mr. Krabs: You done, laddie?

Sally: Yes, sir. *hands papers*

Mr. Krabs: Why, ye'd make a fine waitress I see!

Sally: So, like, I take orders from customers then hand the food to them and stuff?

Mr. Krabs: Exactly. You're hired. Welcome aboard!

Sally: Wow, thanks! I'm just so stoked to be part of the team!

Mr. Krabs: Aye. I'll tell you your basic do's and don'ts tommorow. Go on ahead home. Tommorow will be your first day and I'll tell all my employees about ye.

Sally: Okay. *heads out*

Squidward: Well, what did he say?

Sally: I'm hired!

Squidward: Oh boy...

(Sally whoops and jumps with glee in the distance, she can be heard.)

Mr. Krabs: Don't worry Squidward. I bet she's a nice lady, from what I know of so far. After all, she is a girl.

Squidward: Yeah, let's just hope she's not like that sponge I hate so much.

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Post by Sheldon J. Plankton 1/22/2011, 2:30 pm

Season 1, Episode 2: Learning -Part One-

(Sally walks into the Krusty Krab.)

Mr. Krabs: Well, well, well. If it isn't me newest Krusty Krab employee!

Sally: Good morning, boss!

Spongebob: Ooh, did you say newest Krusty Krab employee?!

(Spongebob springs out from his work station and lands in front of Sally.)

Spongebob: Welcome, I am surely sure that you will enjoy your time here as much as Squidward and I love working here!

Squidward: Pfft.

Spongebob: My name is Spongebob! What is yours?

Sally: Sheesh, you're pretty energetic... for a sponge. I'm Sally.

Mr. Krabs: Yes, I was gonna tell you two about her. But I guess you guys already know about her.

Spongebob: It's always great to see a new face! I bet we'll be great fri-

Sally: *COUGHCOUGHCOUGHWHEEZEHACKCOUGH*

Squidward: ...

Spongebob: Oh my.

Mr. Krabs: Goodness! Are you all right, laddie?

Sally: Yeah, sorry. I just have a sore throat.

Mr. Krabs: Oh.

Spongebob: Anyway, if you'll excuse me, I have to get back into the kitchen and whip up some delicious Krabby Patties!

Sally: ...Go and do that. Damn, he's weird.

Mr. Krabs: So, like I said yesterday, I'm gonna tell you what you should do and what you shouldn't do.

Sally: Fire away.

Mr. Krabs: First, do you see that resturant across the street? *points to the Chum Bucket*

Sally: Mmhm.

Mr. Krabs: You must NEVER, and I mean, NEVER go to the Chum Bucket. That's where me arch-enemy stands.

Sally: Chum? Who would want to eat chum?

Mr. Krabs: Exactly!

Sally: And uh, arch-enemy?

(Plankton suddenly comes up to the Krusty Krab.)

Plankton: That's it, Krabs! I'm through competing with you! One day, my evil plan will destroy your resturant once and for all and I will RULE THE WORLD!!

Mr. Krabs: Oh, Plankton, when are you going to learn that your plans will never succeed?

Plankton: LIES. You knew my evil plans were ALWAYS almost-successful!

Mr. Krabs: HA! You just admitted that! ALMOST-successful!

Plankton: Whatever! I just hope that one day I'll crush you and run you out of business!

Mr. Krabs: I've had enough of this silly talk. *picks up Plankton by the antennaes

Plankton: BI***. LET ME GO.

Mr. Krabs: I'll be dealing with you later. *flicks Plankton back to his deserted resturant*

Sally: What an awkward moment.

Mr. Krabs: You see, Plankton is his name. He's evil. Don't go near him no matter what. Don't listen to what he says either.

Sally: I'll keep that in mind. So... what else is there?




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Post by tvguy347 1/22/2011, 4:12 pm

This is good so far, but you post episodes WAY to fast. Wink
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Post by Wumbology 1/22/2011, 6:58 pm

tvguy347 wrote:This is good so far, but you post episodes WAY to fast. Wink
This. Give it some time before you post another one.
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