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Post by Metal Snake 7/3/2011, 12:17 pm

This will be my first attempt at writing a literature. In the universe of this literature, SBC is a town. A town with high crime rate and lawbreakers at nearly every turn. There are two entities in SBC that keep the crimes under control, the SBC police who investigate the crime, and the SBC court who prosecute the offenders (thank you Law and Order). Now that I've shown you the premise, I'll discuss the backstory and the character cast.


Backstory
SBC used to be a peaceful town, run by terminoob, the creator of SBC, and his council, tvguy, ExKizuna, and that70sguy. Under their government, there was little crime, and few people who didn't abide by the law, so there was not much need for the SBC police and court. But soon, terminoob began to claim that he hated the place he had created, and accused his council of trying to change his community. He eventually left SBC, and tvguy was put in charge of maintaining the town instead. Shortly after though, tvguy received a threatening letter from terminoob. In the letter, terminoob stated that if tvguy and his council continued to manage the site, he would kill them and destroy SBC. Knowing that terminoob was capable of accomplishing this task, tvguy and the council stepped down, and with no one to rule over SBC, the town went into ruin. Anarchy began, crooks flooded the town, and even some of the most loyal members of SBC were forced to turn to terminoob in this time of distress. Fortunately though, the police and SBC court stood strong despite terminoob's threats, for they were SBC's only hope now. They swore that they would stop the criminals, get rid of terminoob, and restore SBC to its original state.

Characters

Protagonists

Jjsthekid- The lead character. The SBC police have made Jjs a detective, whose job is to investigate the crimes that are done on SBC. Infuriated by the injustice done to the town's original leaders, Jjs seeks vengeance on terminoob, and will do anything to achieve this goal.

That70sguy-Having lost his position as a council member, that70sguy became a police officer to help maintain the town another way. He does not despise terminoob as much as some people, but does acknowledge him as a threat.

Clapmaster-Like that70sguy, Clapmaster became a police officer. Clapmaster's grudge for terminoob is not that strong either, for he joined the police mainly to stop some of his friends who joined terminoob's side.

JellyfishJammer-The only woman in the police force, and one of Clapmaster's closest friends. When she heard that Clapmaster was joining the police, she refused to sit by and let him risk his life on his own, and became an officer herself.

Metal Snake-Yes, I make an appearance in this show, but only as a minor character. In the show, I'm one of Jjs' assistants, whose role is to supply Jjs with information and clues that will help him figure out the culprits of the heinous crimes that occur in SBC.

Elastic-The judge of SBC court. His job is to deliver justice to criminals in court, Elastic style.

ExKizuna-A prosecutor. Ex hates terminoob with every fiber in his being for disgracing his friends, and making SBC like this. He has no mercy for terminoob or his subordinates, and is absolutely ruthless to offenders in court.

Antagonists

Terminoob-The main villain in this show. He secretly rules SBC in the shadows, and has threatened the law enforcers of SBC with violence. Now that his threats have failed, he is going to try other methods.

WhaleBlubber-The most hated person in SBC aside from terminoob, WhaleBlubber is a spammer and a crook who has ruined the lives of many. He joined terminoob's side when he was promised the ability to wreak as much havoc as he desired.

NightmareFan-A former troll who became one of terminoob's henchmen to get revenge on the people of SBC. He is also one of the most dangerous criminals in the community, and is even rumored to have special powers.

Wumbology-Wumbology is no criminal. He loves SBC, but he also has a soft spot for some of the SBC members who joined terminoob's side. Wumbology is a defense attorney, and the only one in town, so it's no surprise why everyone hires him to defend them in court.

More updates coming soon.

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Post by 4EverGreen 7/13/2011, 2:45 pm

Don't I get a roll in this literature? I would be great at coming up with brilliant defense strategies for the good guys side.
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Post by Steel Sponge 7/13/2011, 2:58 pm

4EverGreen wrote:Don't I get a roll in this literature? I would be great at coming up with brilliant defense strategies for the good guys side.

I don't believe Metal Snake can give everybody an important role or so. I didn't get one either/yet, but I'm fine with that. Just saying.
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Post by Metal Snake 7/25/2011, 11:40 am

The pilot episode will premiere sometime in August (sorry for the wait).


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Post by Jelly 7/25/2011, 5:46 pm

Aww yess, the only woman with power Cool haha
Sounds interesting, Metal.
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Post by ExKizuna 7/26/2011, 10:05 am

I want a paddle.

Can't wait, Firiluke Snake!
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Post by Metal Snake 8/9/2011, 8:42 pm

SBC: Investigation and Prosecution Premiere

Episode 1: The Letter (Part 1 of 3)

In a dark place in SBC...

"We need to get rid of jjs," a mysterious voice said, "and that's why I'm entrusting you to do this."

"Alright," another person agreed, "I'll do it for you, terminoob."

"Glad to hear that," said terminoob. "Jjs must be stopped before it's too late."

Sometime later...

It was 6:30 AM in the morning, and jjsthekid was sitting in his house typing something on his laptop. Recently, he had been devoting his time to searching for evidence that would incriminate terminoob's subordinates, and was recording his thoughts and ideas on the computer. He hadn't been able to sleep well the past few days, as he had been staying up late to work on finding information for the SBC police.

"This job is a lot more stressful than I thought it was going to be," said a tired jjs. "I need to stay awake to type this, I'm going to have to make some coffee."

Jjs walked downstairs, and was about to go into the kitchen, when he saw an envelope lying next to his front door. It had apparently been delivered through the front door's mail slot, but jjs had already collected his mail from yesterday, and he knew the mail didn't come this early where he lived.

"What is this?" Jjs asked himself as he picked the envelope up.

There was no postage or address on the envelope, and the words "From Your Friend" were written on the middle of it. Out of curiosity, jjs opened it up and found a piece of paper with text written in blue pen. It read:

Dear jjs,

You better not continue your work for the police. If you do not relinquish your position as a detective, I will kill you in the most inhumane way imagined by man. Give up, or else you can kiss the light of day goodbye.
Love,
The Man You Love to Hate

"What the hell?!" Jjs shouted, as he stared at the letter in disbelief.

"Terminoob...it has to be him..." he said as he pressed his fingers against the letter in frustration. "I need to show this to the police!"

At the police station...

That70sguy was at his desk reading over the threatening letter that jjs showed him.

"Wow, this is incredible," said 70s. "You were just promoted to being a detective not so long ago, and you've already become a target."

"I need to know who sent this letter immediately," a nervous jjs said. "There's no postage on it, so it couldn't have been mailed to me. The person who wrote that came to my house and put it in my mail slot last night, so they must know where I live."

"While it must be terminoob's message in this letter," 70s responded, "I doubt that he would come to your place in the middle of the night himself. I believe that he had one of his subordinates write it and deliver it for him, but we can't know for sure who did it without any evidence."

"The purpose of this letter is probably just to intimidate me," jjs said, "but I can't take any chances. I'll have to stay at a friend's house in the meantime."

"Good idea," replied 70s. "I need to give the letter and envelope to our forensic expert, Mr. Dr. Professor Patrick, so he can indentify any fingerprints or handwriting similarities. I'll also have Officers Clapmaster and JellyfishJammer talk to the people around your neighborhood and ask if they saw anyone suspicious around your home. For now, I don't need you roaming around and doing detective work in broad daylight."

"That's fine with me," jjs said half-heartedly as he got up and prepared to leave. He was disappointed that he wasn't going to be able to help much at all with this case.

"We'll call you when we get any updates on the situation," 70s informed him. "Just remember to stay safe."

"Alright." Jjs replied as he walked out of the station.

Meanwhile, hundreds of miles away...

Officer Clappy was outside of the store "Steel's Super Target" writing a ticket for spongebobiscool, who had parked his car in a handicapped zone. Spongebobiscool was coming out of the store with the items he had purchased, when he saw Clappy putting the ticket on his car windshield.

"Hey, wat are u doin to my car?" a confused spongebobiscool said as he walked up to his car and grabbed the ticket.

"I'm not doing anything to the car," Clappy replied, "I'm giving you a ticket for parking it in an area where you're not supposed to park."

"1000 doubloos?!" spongebobiscool exclaimed as he read the ticket. "This is rdiculos, I jus pay 300 for my stuf, an how was I suppos to know not to par khere?

"Let me explain it in words even you can understand," said Clappy as he put his hand on his face. "The BLUE area is only for SBC members who are either disabled, or happen to be over the age of 80. You are neither disabled or elderly, so you are not allowed to park here. You did so despite that, so now you have to pay a fine of one thousand doubloons as punishment. Got it?"

"I'm starting to getting piss now," an angry spongebobiscool responded. "You charg me mony even thogh I done nothin wrong! I ned money to buy thins, so you better not give me thi crap alright?!"

Clappy stared at spongebobiscool with a furious look on his face. In the next shot, spongebobiscool was handcuffed, and in the backseat of a police car.

"Wat i do?" spongebobiscool asked as Clappy slammed the car door.

"Just take him down to the station, Jelly," Clappy said to Officer JellyfishJammer, who was driving the police car.

"When will you learn that we don't have the patience for this garbage, sbiscool?" a disappointed Jelly said as she started the engine.

"DAM IT!" sbiscool shouted. "ALL OF U GUYS ARE IDOTS FOR DOING THIS! I FEEL LIK KILING U CRAZY COPS! FIRE UP IN THE HOLE!"

"Oh, how silly of me to forget," Jelly replied. "Never. You'll NEVER learn."

Jelly was about to drive away, when she got a message from 70s on the communicator in the car.

"Officer Jelly? Officer Jelly? Come in." 70s said over the intercom.

"Officer Jelly here, Lieutenant." Jelly replied into the communicator.

"I need both you and Officer Clapmaster to report back at the police station, immediately." 70s said.

"I was just about to head back there, sir," said Jelly. "What's going on?"

"Something strange..." 70s replied.

Meanwhile, approximately 94.58677 miles away...

Jjs was outside, knocking on the door of the house of the person known as Luke (or Metal Snake or LukeJames, whatever he wishes to be called). He had returned to his house earlier for a short while to pack only his clothes, and the bare essentials in a suitcase that he was carrying in his left hand. He also had his laptop in a bag that he was carrying over his right shoulder.

"Hello?" Luke asked as he answered the door.

"Luke!" Jjs exclaimed. "I need to stay over at your place for a few days. I got a death threat from someone who knows where I live."

"Wow," Luke said, "so sorry about that. I guess you can stay over for a while, but why didn't you call me and tell me about this in advance?"

"I didn't think it would make a difference," said Jjs. "Not trying to sound rude, but I've never seen you question my motives, you agree with me on a lot of things."

"Eh, guess you're right." Luke replied.

"I rest my case." Jjs said.

Just then, Jjs got a call on his cell phone. He checked the caller ID, and was pleased to see that it was 70s.

"Oh yes," said Jjs happily, as he then answered the phone. "Hello?"

"Jjs, I have something to tell you," said a startled 70s. "We have a suspicion on who may have sent you that letter."

"Thank God," Jjs said in relief, "who do you think did it?"

"I hate to say it," 70s replied, "but we were able to trace some fingerprints on the envelope of the letter. MDPP confirmed that they were SpongeOddFan's fingerprints, and we have put out a warrant for his arrest."

"What?!" Jjs shouted in shock.

End of Episode One.
Tune in for Part Two, as this mystery is still yet to be solved.

Please post your thoughts and opinions on this lit if you desire, it'll help me decide whether I should continue this fic or not.


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Post by jjsthekid 8/9/2011, 10:00 pm

Pretty cool. Can't wait for more.
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