Re: The Writer's Lounge

by **teenj12** 6/9/2011, 4:04 pm

Sabresponge wrote:Adventures in the Underground City

Season 3

(Klarisse runs out of the church in her wedding dress)

(Spongebob sits on an electric chair)

(Plankton and Krabs conjoin together)

(Spongebob hands the formula to an old man with an evil grin)

(People start disappearing deep into the ocean)

(Spongebob collapses on the floor drinking a strange liquid)

(Spongebob and Patrick are brutally beaten up in prison)

(Spongebob and Sandy passionately kiss as Spongebob falls to his doom...)

Don't miss the season three premier "Wedding to Forget" This Friday followed by the pilot of my new show "The Under W.A.T.E.R. Agents"

Too early much?

by **CDCB** 6/12/2011, 8:51 pm

Something I'm considering for CDCB's Bikini Bottom Adventures:

I might make an animatic out of a short scene from an episode. I don't know what scene it would be or what episode it would be from, but I do know a couple things:

- My voice would be in it (but not SB, Pat, Squid...etc.)
- You'd see me as a fish
- It would be uploaded to YouTube for easy access.

So what do you all think? Would you like to see something like this?

by **teenj12** 6/12/2011, 9:16 pm

I would like that Smile

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by **that70sguy92** 6/13/2011, 9:24 am

Sounds good, CDCB.

by **SpongeSebastian** 6/13/2011, 1:27 pm

CDCB wrote:Something I'm considering for CDCB's Bikini Bottom Adventures:

I might make an animatic out of a short scene from an episode. I don't know what scene it would be or what episode it would be from, but I do know a couple things:

- My voice would be in it (but not SB, Pat, Squid...etc.)
- You'd see me as a fish
- It would be uploaded to YouTube for easy access.

So what do you all think? Would you like to see something like this?

Sounds good so far. Do you still need me to help with the voices/writing?

by **Steel Sponge** 6/15/2011, 3:44 pm

Underwater Surivor SBC: The Lost Temples

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PLOT: 16 contestants (eight new and eight old) And two other contestants in the future)) compete for Season 2 in a re-mastered version of Legends of the Hidden Temple. More secrets, more risks, and more excitement happen in the lost temples. Who will win?

CONTESTANTS:

Returning (To be revealed during the upcoming special):

1.) ???
2.) ???
3.) ???
4.) ???
5.) ???
6.) ???
7.) ???
8.) ???

Joining:

1.) Old Man Jenkins
2.) Jelly
3.) Storytime7
4.) Deli
5.) CDCB
6.) ACSBehemothHellCat
7.) Fa
8.) KetsueKiran

by **Sabre** 7/2/2011, 8:08 am

I'm thinking of renaming 'Adventures in the Underground City' as, lets face it, it's a pretty lame title as it has nothing to do with my spin-off whatsoever and the only reason it was used in the first place was because I couldn't think of anything better (And the fact I didn't know I would have this many episodes and it would go on for this long)

What do you think, I mean it's not set in stone but just a thought...

by **teenj12** 7/2/2011, 9:57 am

Tails wrote:I'm thinking of renaming 'Adventures in the Underground City' as, lets face it, it's a pretty lame title as it has nothing to do with my spin-off whatsoever and the only reason it was used in the first place was because I couldn't think of anything better (And the fact I didn't know I would have this many episodes and it would go on for this long)

What do you think, I mean it's not set in stone but just a thought...

I always thought it meant like, since the show takes place in Bikini Bottom in the sea. This would actually be a good replacement name for Spongebob. Don't change.

by **tvguy347** 7/2/2011, 12:09 pm

I've always personally liked the name, "Adventures in the Underground City" even though it's not related to the actual content of the spin off.

by **teenj12** 7/2/2011, 1:57 pm

Master Chief is Lord wrote:I've always personally liked the name, "Adventures in the Underground City" even though it's not related to the actual content of the spin off.

Yes it is.

by **OMJ** 7/2/2011, 7:25 pm

Tossing around the idea of a medical dramedy called "Weenie Hut General". It might have some potential.

by **tvguy347** 7/2/2011, 7:27 pm

lol sounds awesome, OMJ! SOO Happy

by **OMJ** 7/2/2011, 7:33 pm

Thanks cable guy. Might take some time to get to this, though.

by **Metal Snake** 7/2/2011, 10:44 pm

I have an idea for a literature. Here's the description for it.

"There exists a universe where SBC is more than just a site. It's a universe completely separated from the real world. Unfortunately, this universe is also filled with crime, crime that is dealt with by two entities, the SBC police, and SBC Court. Witness the adventures of the SBC police as they bring crooks to justice, where they will be prosecuted and punished by the SBC court."

Please tell me what you think about it.

by **OMJ** 7/2/2011, 10:53 pm

Sounds like Judge Dredd to me. You should go through with it. It sounds interesting.

by **teenj12** 7/2/2011, 11:29 pm

I love it but this is the spin off writers lounge.

by **Metal Snake** 7/2/2011, 11:35 pm

Pacman wrote:I love it but this is the spin off writers lounge.

Thanks, but there is no lounge for discussing literature.

by **teenj12** 7/3/2011, 12:35 pm

Link wrote:
Pacman wrote:I love it but this is the spin off writers lounge.

Thanks, but there is no lounge for discussing literature.

There is however an Announcement thread pinned.

by **Metal Snake** 7/3/2011, 12:49 pm

Pacman wrote:
Link wrote:
Pacman wrote:I love it but this is the spin off writers lounge.

Thanks, but there is no lounge for discussing literature.
There is however an Announcement thread pinned.

I see what you mean, but I wanted to discuss the idea with other spin-off writers.

by **OMJ** 7/3/2011, 1:27 pm

I think we should either have a seperate thread to discuss lit ideas or just merge them here.

by **teenj12** 7/3/2011, 1:30 pm

Daddy's Back, Sweethearts wrote:I think we should either have a seperate thread to discuss lit ideas or just merge them here.

We don't have Lits Writers Lounge, but there's an announcement thread..

by **OMJ** 7/3/2011, 1:42 pm

Pacman wrote:
Daddy's Back, Sweethearts wrote:I think we should either have a seperate thread to discuss lit ideas or just merge them here.
We don't have Lits Writers Lounge, but there's an announcement thread..

But the announcement thread is only about making announcements for any current or upcoming lits, not so much about tossing around and discussing ideas. Isn't that why there are seperate announcement and lounge threads for the spin off section?

by **ExKizuna** 7/3/2011, 2:47 pm

To clear this up, I made a Writer's Lounge for Lit.'s

by **teenj12** 7/5/2011, 4:27 pm

The sequel Team Spongebob movie will be called:

Team Spongebob - Emotions Touching Across Time

Thoughts.

by **that70sguy92** 7/5/2011, 5:08 pm

So I've already written much of the episode but not asked your guys' opinions: What do you think of an episode of BT where characters burst into songs that move along the plot/express their feelings/dig up secrets?

by **Metal Snake** 7/5/2011, 5:15 pm

that70sguy92 wrote:So I've already written much of the episode but not asked your guys' opinions: What do you think of an episode of BT where characters burst into songs that move along the plot/express their feelings/dig up secrets?

That would be alright.

by **that70sguy92** 7/6/2011, 1:04 pm

Scene from the episode:

Spoiler:

by **Clappy** 7/6/2011, 1:36 pm

Dammit 70s, your BT episode idea was going to be the focal point of my next spin-off. xD. I haven't announced it until just now, but this is quite the coincidence haha.

I know I have expressed my beliefs about longer spin-offs in the past, but I am considering this new spin-off might be a bit longer because....the characters are going to break into song and the lyrics. It will be SpongeBob themed, but at the same time I am throwing around the possibility of making it more focal about custom made characters since that is the way spin-offs have been for quite some time now. Time for me to finally catch up, but at the same time, not change up my style that much.

I will reveal more details later tonight after I get off work, but what do you guys think?

by **ExKizuna** 7/9/2011, 7:48 am

So, this is more about the structure of the spin off, rather than an idea. So, for Robot Trout, should I keep it with the 5-6 Spin Off skits, with one of those skits being the focal point of the episode(By that I mean, the skit's logner than the others, and it names the episode, etc.) or should I include MORE skits, and just scrap the whole 'making one of them the most worked on in the episode' idea?

Thoughts?

by **that70sguy92** 7/9/2011, 10:59 am

I like one of them being focused on the most.

by **Metal Snake** 7/9/2011, 12:25 pm

ExKizuna wrote:So, this is more about the structure of the spin off, rather than an idea. So, for Robot Trout, should I keep it with the 5-6 Spin Off skits, with one of those skits being the focal point of the episode(By that I mean, the skit's logner than the others, and it names the episode, etc.) or should I include MORE skits, and just scrap the whole 'making one of them the most worked on in the episode' idea?

Thoughts?

I'd do it Robot Chicken style, and make one of them the main event of the episode.

by **OMJ** 7/9/2011, 1:43 pm

Yea Ex, RC-style is the way to go with this one.

Anyways, I've been thinking that since CoTD is on the shelf atm, I've been contemplating bringing back Break A Leg! for one final wrap-up season and finish it off the way I really had intended for it.

by **Sabre** 7/16/2011, 7:40 am

I've just finished the theme song for "Adventures in the Underground City" it is yet to have any vocals (Supplied by me) but I hope you like my work in progress...

by **tvguy347** 7/16/2011, 11:12 am

I posted my opinion in the other thread. Smile

by **Metal Snake** 7/23/2011, 1:12 am

Alright guys, I have a decision for you to make. Now that Sebastion has ended, I'm going to write another spin-off, which is definitely going to be either a reboot of Origins of Mermaid Man, or a sequel to The Journey of Sebastion. If you'd like to see me write another spin-off, please tell me which spin-off you want me to write first, Origins of Mermaid Man, or a sequel to The Journey of Sebastion. Thanks.

by **that70sguy92** 7/23/2011, 3:09 pm

Metal Snake wrote:Alright guys, I have a decision for you to make. Now that Sebastion has ended, I'm going to write another spin-off, which is definitely going to be either a reboot of Origins of Mermaid Man, or a sequel to The Journey of Sebastion. If you'd like to see me write another spin-off, please tell me which spin-off you want me to write first, Origins of Mermaid Man, or a sequel to The Journey of Sebastion. Thanks.

Biased as I am, I'd love to see Origins.

by **OMJ** 7/23/2011, 3:29 pm

Origins since my own origin story is currently on the backburner. I await anything you do, bro.

by **Sabre** 7/27/2011, 9:01 am

Well the musical episode of "Adventures in the Underground City" seemed to get many views, So I was wondering if I should do it again some time (Not anytime soon, but maybe next season) I just want to know if you thought it worked well...

by **that70sguy92** 7/27/2011, 5:14 pm

Sabre wrote:Well the musical episode of "Adventures in the Underground City" seemed to get many views, So I was wondering if I should do it again some time (Not anytime soon, but maybe next season) I just want to know if you thought it worked well...

I really liked it! Smile

by **tvguy347** 7/27/2011, 6:02 pm

Sabre wrote:Well the musical episode of "Adventures in the Underground City" seemed to get many views, So I was wondering if I should do it again some time (Not anytime soon, but maybe next season) I just want to know if you thought it worked well...

I've only been able to get online for a few minutes at a time recently, but I'll definitely read it once I get my laptop back from Apple. Wink

by **teenj12** 7/27/2011, 11:21 pm

Plot for Team Spongebob - Emotions Touching Across Time Movie:

Graduation is afoot and Pearl must decide what she wants to do with her future, stay with Team Spongebob or pursue a career and college. Meanwhile, Spongebob and Linda will have to decide if they see a future together before making the biggest commitment in a relationship - Marriage. All this while Shin tries to focus the team on Denominator's next fleeting attack.

by **Sabre** 7/31/2011, 6:14 am

NEWS

Adventures in the Underground City

When I return from my vacation on Saturday, I will post a special interactive episode where users will be able to decide how the episode ends and how the plot point will affect many future episodes! SOO Happy

Spoiler:

by **that70sguy92** 8/8/2011, 11:26 pm

Already posted this in another topic, but I'd love some thoughts here! Smile

Here's a preview for the season finale of Bikini Top, most likely coming tomorrow.

NARRATOR: It's been one crazy year for the inhabitants of Bikini Top, a Hellmouth under the sea. But tomorrow, it all comes to a conclusion...

VEERA: Get up, it's time for graduation!

NARRATOR: Graduation, of course. But what goes on...

MORGAN: I still have scars. I don't want him in my life.

HEATHER: No, don't go!

JAKE: My daughter is sick!

(shows Bryan crying)

BRENDA: Get the fuck away from me, this is all your fault!

ANNA: Mom, are you okay?

JACKIE: JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!

NAOMI: Mom, you'd better not be lying to me!

MOLLY: Just another day in Bikini Top...

NARRATOR: But there's more...

SETH: Holy shit.

MIKAYLA: I can't believe it...

PRINCIPAL FISHKINS: I now present to you, the Bikini Top High School Class of 2011!

NARRATOR: Coming soon...

TORI: I'm going to miss this...

by **Sabre** 8/10/2011, 7:01 am

It's Wednesday so the poll on my latest episode of "Adventures in the Underground City" will be closing very soon (You have until 2:45 before it will be closed) So get your votes in by then and the specially selected ending may rely on your vote!

by **Steel Sponge** 8/14/2011, 5:43 pm

First off, there will some UWS stuff at Glove World after the upcoming special. Also note that it could come out Monday or Tuesday and I'll post a trailer of Season 2 pretty soon.

Anyways, time to do some counting again:

Pisces Moon: 43, 084 words
Z-Storm: 39, 086 words
Guru Gakuto: 16, 347 words
Underwater Survivor: SBC Style: 52, 084 words
S.P.O.N.G.E.B.O.B: 1, 885 words

Total: 152, 485 words. Woohoo.

by **teenj12** 8/14/2011, 6:27 pm

How do you guys know how many words your spin-off has?

by **tvguy347** 8/14/2011, 6:28 pm

A lot of us type in word processors and they have word count, so it'll tell us.

by **teenj12** 8/14/2011, 6:32 pm

Oh, I just use Microsoft Works Task Launcher (I reccomend it) .

by **tvguy347** 8/14/2011, 6:58 pm

teenj12 wrote:Oh, I just use Microsoft Works Task Launcher (I reccomend it) .

Apple Works> Microsoft Works

Just saying. Silly Face!

But Apple doesn't use it anymore; it's in iWork now. Does Task Launcher have all the functionality of Word? (Assuming not, as Microsoft Works is the free, dumbed-down version of Office) Silly Face!

by **teenj12** 8/14/2011, 7:06 pm

It is not dumbed down in the least. It has history, templates, project note taking, programs, spreadsheets (the look like teacher grade books), Office word, note, excel, and powerpoint.

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