At Dawn We Die

Plot: At exactly midnight on New Year's, 1997, Kimberly Claire recieves a mysterious text message from an untraceable adress reading:

You die at dawn, Kimberly

Freaking out, Kimberly runs from the bar she's at with only seven hours left until sunrise. Soon enough, Detective Hernandez and Jacob Ryan are soon wrapped into the situation as they race, trying to evade the killer. As they recieve text messages from the murderer every half hour, they soon discover secrets that may result in a shocking death.

AT DAWN WE DIE
COMING SOON

Wouldn't it be easier just to track down the phone, that the killer is using? Also it's obvious that the Killer knows Kimberly, so the detectives have one lead in the case. Either way, I'll read when it comes out.

ILL SO READ IT!

Hassan wrote:Wouldn't it be easier just to track down the phone, that the killer is using? Also it's obvious that the Killer knows Kimberly, so the detectives have one lead in the case. Either way, I'll read when it comes out.

The phone is untraceable because it traces to a McDonald's in Russia. No comment on the killer knowing Kimberly.

tvguy347 wrote:

Hassan wrote:Wouldn't it be easier just to track down the phone, that the killer is using? Also it's obvious that the Killer knows Kimberly, so the detectives have one lead in the case. Either way, I'll read when it comes out.

The phone is untraceable because it traces to a McDonald's in Russia. No comment on the killer knowing Kimberly.

It would be awesome if one of the Detectives are secretly the killer.

Official Teaser:

We see a woman sitting alone at a table in a bar. A computer sits in front of her, a beer in her hand. A notepad rests beside the computer. Kimberly Claire is a wannabe author, but for now she works at the local supermarket as a checkout girl.

Her cellphone suddenly vibrates, signaling that she recieved a new text message.

She looks at it...hesitating.

Kimberly picks it up...and reads..

You die at dawn, Kimberly.

Shivering, Kimberly races out of the bar. She calls her FBI friend, Detective Perry Hernandez who is in town to help her. Once Hernandez arrives at Kimberly's apartment...

*shows apartment exploding*

*shows BMW crashing through warehouse window*

*shows gun being shot*

*shows another text message*

*shows computers suddenly shutting down*

*ship sinking*

*an airplane crashes into a building*

*cops cars race after a black Sedan*

We Die At Dawn

Coming Soon..

Was there even texting in 1997?

Surreal Death Dog wrote:Was there even texting in 1997?

Yeah, texting was around since 1992.

Hassan wrote:

Surreal Death Dog wrote:Was there even texting in 1997?

Yeah, texting was around since 1992.

No one really used them around that time though. To quote Wiki:

Initial growth of text messaging was slow, with customers in 1995 sending on average only 0.4 messages per GSM customer per month.

I could be wrong, though.

Texting didn't gain popularity until a few years ago, but it's been around for a long time.