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Post by WWESpongefan 6/4/2011, 7:34 pm

(Ok I used to post my stories on Fanfiction.net. I guess people didn't like them because of the way I did it. Maybe the characters are out of character but this is my imagination. So I'm going to give it a try here and hope that people here will better understand my stories. Plus for the main part I write a lot of stories based on Spongebob and Sandy. Or (Spandy.) I just hope my stories will get better comments and reviews here than they did on Fanfiction. If no one likes this story I will call it quits and no longer post stories online at all. If no one likes them here then I will keep my other stories to myself. But I will try once. Usually I just write everything into one big story but sometimes they can be long so I guess I will post chapters.)

Spongebob's Jealousy
(Chapter One)

(Spongebob gets up early as usual to fix himself breakfast and to feed Gary breakfast. Then Spongebob gets ready for work. On his way to work he stops to talk to Patrick for a while.)

Patrick: Hey Spongebob do you want to go jellyfishing?

Spongebob: Sorry Patrick I can't. I have to work today?

Patrick: Aw man. There's got to be something I can do.

Spongebob: I'm sure you will think of something.

Patrick: Maybe I can go over to Sandy's Treedome to see if maybe she will want to play.

Spongebob: Wait... how long have you and Sandy been hanging out?

Patrick: We sometimes hang out when your at work. Even thought Sandy and I don't always get along I still sometimes go over there when I'm bored.

Spongebob: Wait... isn't Sandy still hibernating?

Patrick: No. She called me last week and told me that she had woke up from hibernation.

Spongebob: But why didn't she tell me?

Patrick: I don't know. Maybe she just likes me better.

Spongebob: How often do you and Sandy see each other?

Patrick: A few times a month. Why are you asking so many questions about me and Sandy?

Spongebob: I don't know... just curious I guess.

Patrick: You like her don't you Spongebob?

Spongebob: Well of course I do. She's my best friend too you know.

Patrick: That's not what I meant Spongebob. You like, like her. You know... like more than a friend.

Spongebob: What! That's crazy Patrick.

Patrick: Nice try Spongebob, but I know you like her... as a matter of fact you love her don't you?

Spongebob: Your crazy Patrick.

Patrick: Maybe so but I know you love her. Do you want to know how I know?

Spongebob: How do you know?

Patrick: Because I hear you talk in your sleep and you've said that you love Sandy.

Spongebob: So that was a dream and anything can happen in a dream.

Patrick: Is that why I hear you say that every night?

Spongebob: Ok! Maybe what you said is true. But Sandy doesn't know does she?

Patrick: Not that I know of. I promise Spongebob I won't tell Sandy.

Spongebob: Thanks Patrick.

(Spongebob's Krusty Krab watch beeps)

Spongebob: I better get to work. I'll see you later Patrick.

(Spongebob arrives at the Krusty Krab just in time but all day he kept wondering if Patrick had went to see Sandy. He also kept wondering why Sandy didn't call him to tell him that she had woke up from hibernation. Then some words that Patrick had said earlier started ringing in his head.)

"Maybe Sandy just likes me better."

(Spongebob thought.)

"I sure hope not."

(Ok that's the end of chapter one. I really do hope that this story will be better here than on Fanfiction. What did you guys think? Should I continue?)

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Post by Dragiiin123 6/4/2011, 8:21 pm

LETS WRITE A SLASH FICTION.
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Post by tvguy347 6/4/2011, 8:23 pm

Really nice. Smile I prefer a different type of format, but this was good nonetheless.
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Post by teenj12 6/4/2011, 8:28 pm

Jealous Of A Star anyone..
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Post by tvguy347 6/4/2011, 9:10 pm

teenj12 wrote:Jealous Of A Star anyone..

Oh, tell Deswim to come back here and to be more active! D:
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Post by Metal Snake 6/5/2011, 1:53 am

A little out of character, but still decent.
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Post by Wumbology 6/5/2011, 7:30 am

Didn't seem out of character to me. I liked it. Smile
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Post by WWESpongefan 6/5/2011, 11:45 pm

Ok I'm going to do chapter two. Yes I realize that they may seem out of character. Oh and this story is about Spongebob and Sandy. I may finish the story in this chapter mostly because I have the time.

Chapter two

(Spongebob had arrived at the Krusty Krab and all day he kept wondering if Patrick had went to see Sandy. At some point he started talking to himself and Squidward overhears)

Spongebob: Why didn't Sandy tell me she woke up from hibernation and why would she tell Patrick?

Squidward: Spongebob you're talking to yourself again.

Spongebob: Sorry, but I just can't get over the fact that Patrick would go over to see Sandy when I'm not around.

Squidward: Jealous.

Spongebob: I am not.

Squidward: Yes you are. Trust me I know all about your little crush on Sandy.

Spongebob: You do how?

Squidward: Yeah because you told me.

Spongebob: Oh yeah. I just wonder what goes on while I'm not around.

Squidward: Yeah that's jealousy right there. If you weren't jealous then you wouldn't care.

Spongebob: Hold that thought Squidward. It's time for my lunch break.

(Instead of Spongebob eating lunch he goes out the door and heads towards the treedome, but doesn't want to be seen so he hides behind a rock. Sure enough Patrick and Sandy were hanging out that day. Patrick was just simply running around in circles until he fell which made Sandy laugh, but just seeing them together made him very jealous. He knew his break was about over so he ran back to the Krusty Krab thinking that no one saw him. Patrick didn't see him, but Sandy did and wanted to know what was going on. Spongebob went back into the Krusty Krab and the rest of the day went on. When the day was over Spongebob went home and fed Gary his dinner. Sandy came over to his house.)

Spongebob: Someone is at the door. Hello.

Sandy: Hey Spongebob.

Spongebob: Hi Sandy. What brings you by?

Sandy: I just thought I'd stop by and see you. We need to talk.

Spongebob: Ok. What do you want to talk about?

Sandy: How about what you were doing today.

Spongebob: Well... working, then I took my break.

Sandy: Spongebob I saw you outside earlier. You were running back toward the direction of the Krusty Krab, but you looked upset about something and I just wanted to know if something was wrong.

Spongebob: No nothing is wrong. Everything is fine.

Sandy: No something is wrong Spongebob I know it. I know you well enough by now to know when something is wrong. I can hear it in your voice that something is wrong. What is it?

Spongebob: Well when did you start hanging out with Patrick?

Sandy: He just asks me to come over when your at work. Why does that matter to you anyway?

Spongebob: Well when I saw you and Patrick spending time together I guess it just made me jealous.

Sandy: You have no reason to be jealous Spongebob.

Spongebob: Patrick told me that you called him about a week ago telling him that you woke up from hibernation. Why didn't you tell me?

Sandy: You were at work and I would've forgotten to tell you when you got home so I told Patrick to tell you.

Spongebob: Oh well he told me early this morning that you had woken up from hibernation over a week ago. Well there is just one more thing I need to know.

Sandy: What would that be?

Spongebob: What do you and Patrick do when I'm not around?

Sandy: Nothing really because Patrick can't ever decide on what to do so he just starts to randomly run around. You made it sound as if...

Spongebob: You liked Patrick. Patrick had gotten this thought in my head and he had said maybe you just like him better. Well do you?

Sandy: No way Spongebob. Trust me there is nothing going on between me and Patrick.

Spongebob: Ok I just needed to know. I feel a lot better now that we straightened that out. Now can I tell you something?

Sandy: Sure.

Spongebob: Well I'll tell you but first you have to promise me something.

Sandy: Ok and what would that be?

Spongebob: That we will always be friends no matter what.

Sandy: No need because once your friends with me your friends for life.

Spongebob: Oh... just friends?

Sandy: Huh?

Spongebob: I mean what I'm about to tell you is really important but its good to know that we will always be friends.

Sandy: Well what is it?

Spongebob: I love you Sandy. I love you with all of my heart. Your the best thing that's ever happened to me. I can't stand it when you leave. When you do extreme sports I always worry about you getting hurt. Hibernation is always the worst time of the year for me because I don't get to see you for several months. I know I have to work a lot and sometimes I may never get to see you but I'm always thinking about you wondering if you would ever feel the same way about me.

Sandy: Of course I do Spongebob. You always know how to make me laugh when I'm feeling down. Your always there for me even when I do extreme sports. You always put up with the things that I do. I may not always listen to you when you say something is dangerous and you turn out to be right but at least your always there for me. I love you too Spongebob.

Spongebob: I guess you were right I didn't have any reason to be jealous. I was just over reacting. So here's another question... do you want to go out with me?

Sandy: Sure. When is a good time for you?

Spongebob: How about right now?

Sandy: Ok.

(Spongebob and Sandy decide to go see a movie. At some point they reached for the popcorn at the same time. Spongebob's hand landed on top of Sandy's hand and they looked at each other and blushed. They both liked the movie and they both agreed that it was a great first date.)

Sandy: I had a great time tonight Spongebob.

Spongebob: I did too.

Sandy: Can we have lunch tomorrow?

Spongebob: Sure my lunch break is at twelve o clock.

Sandy: Ok.

(Sandy then quickly takes off her helmet and kissed Spongebob on the cheek. Then put her helmet back on and got rid of the water. Spongebob and Sandy both blushed.)

Sandy: Sorry next time I'll warn you before I do something crazy.

Spongebob: It's ok... people do all kinds of crazy things when they're in love.

The End.

(I personally liked this one. I think it's the best one I've done. Some of you may know that my stories on Fanfiction. net were not so good. This is the end of this one. Let me know what you think. Should I do another one sometime soon?
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Post by Wumbology 6/7/2011, 8:15 pm

I think you should continue this one, I can see some potential still coming from it.
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Post by WWESpongefan 6/7/2011, 8:18 pm

That's all I got for this one. How would you see it continuing?
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Post by SpongeSebastian 6/8/2011, 3:58 pm

A little cheesy, but fairly good by Spandy standards. Good job!
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Post by WWESpongefan 6/8/2011, 4:32 pm

Thanks
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Post by that70sguy92 6/8/2011, 7:49 pm

So is this over? If so I'll move it to the Shipyard.
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Post by WWESpongefan 6/8/2011, 8:03 pm

Yes this one is over.
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